THAT IS ENTIRELY THE WRONG FILE

okay that's the right file it's just named wrong

First off, recordings are a bit staticy, I'm not sure what you can do about that, if anything, but please try your best.

Other than that, You spoke very quickly, which is exactly what I imagined. However, while speaking quickly, make sure to avoid making Aya sound like an airhead. Try pronouncing the words more clearly. That might help.

Higher pitch would be nice too.

Overall very good, but it needs a little work.

>while speaking quickly, make sure to avoid making Aya sound like an airhead

That doesn't seem out of character. However, proper annunciation is something that is very important. There are some places where it seems like you're a little bit less confident and your volume lowers for those parts, so try to keep your volume uniform while recording.