Welp someone bumped the topic on VA Alliance forum so I figured at least attempting this would be okay. I did Koishi and Yuka (and also Sakuya but I don't know if I like it at all, and I'm experiencing difficulty with the last line). I'm extremely new to this, so I would immensely appreciate any kind of feedback, even if it's harsh. I can handle it.

Umm, I feel like some of the lines are a bit too generic or plain sounding. I'm not entirely sure how to sound? I might try more later, unless I just do it too terribly.