Good. Perhaps some fixes to the audio quality, but that can be addressed at a later time.

Only suggestion is so maybe lighten up a little bit; some points you sound just a bit to cold and gruff

This is good. If anything, sound a tiny bit more casual.

If I had to pick you for a role based on current submissions, it would be this one.

You hit it on the head. well done.

Just make sure to record so that they all sound like Clip number 1. That one had the best recording by far.

Ironically enough, Clip 1 was the only one that recorded in mono and not stereo. Hrmm. I think I just have a wonky headset honestly as I can't control when it switches ^_^

I tried to be a bit more laid back and cocky, and this should be better audio quality as well.

When the Teammates scream for the medic, instead of "Medic!" it should be "Eirin Eirin!" and "Help me, Eeeerin!"

But what would Eirin scream?

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We've already taken this into consideration.

Eirin would also call for "Eirin", as in usual gameplay, there'd often be more than one Medic per team, so that'd be an inescapable issue.